I have to agree with much too arrogant.. The use of The Empire is confusing and brings strong feelings of Star Wars. I'm sure there are other terms that could be used that would eliminate that association.
I loved the story, however - would love more details and depth, but it's a great scene and I want to read more about these characters.
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Date: 2024-08-18 12:28 am (UTC)I loved the story, however - would love more details and depth, but it's a great scene and I want to read more about these characters.
- Erulisse (one L)